12.07.06

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Posted in Uncategorized at 3:02 pm by modthryth

OBLIVION came rushing to this bedroom

With his frayed flowing robes barely touching the damp floor

Turning everything to ashes as he passed, and finally cloaking himself to her.

 

 

 

 

 

10 Comments »

  1. rr said,

    eerie…
    it worked. good job…

  2. umaispink said,

    na potray mo and oblivion in such a way that i really felt it..

    di lang kaayo clear ang summary line for me, or jugo lang gd ko.

    uhm, it seems that rr likes all your works huh…. yeeeeee :)

    issue..hahaha jokes!!!

    ciao gurl.

    >>mas gusto ko gali 2ng white olander compared sa ‘beautiful girl’

  3. umaispink said,

    jugo gid ko!

    T_T

    its ang, not and

  4. Crimson Petals and the Red said,

    I smell something fishy..

    oi…..

    joke.

  5. saikow said,

    KORNI!!! KORNI KAAU!! AS IN!!! hehehe… loko lang… mmm… is it just me or ang maimagine ko na robe is yellow na may red sa edges… not touching te damp floor as to not extinguish itself… tama ba, modtret?

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  8. your entries are really well-written. but how come i haven’t read recent entries from you yet? remember? one entry per week. so go on… move those fingers on the keyboard. write. :-)

  9. potchakz said,

    are u the girl?

  10. modthryth said,

    potchakz”: maybe ;)


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